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2007年12月31日月曜日
Tire
I went to my part- time job from 2 a.m. to 4 p.m. It was very hard, because I was quite sleep, and many customer came my shop. I was very tire. We made 150 hors d’oeuvres. I came bake home at 5 p.m. I slept about an hour. I always eat dinner, but I didn’t eat dinner today. I wanted to sleep!! I watch on TV everyday, but I didn’t watch. Because I wanted to sleep!! I went to my bed at 9 p.m. It was very early time for me.
2007年12月30日日曜日
2007年12月29日土曜日
2007年12月28日金曜日
rice cake
My family pounded steamed rice into cake today. It is event for my family in Decenber. However, I only ate this. I didn't help them, because I wanted to watch a entertainment news. The news is that Jyo Odagiri and You Kashii got mariage!! I don't like him, but he is honest. He is great man!!
2007年12月27日木曜日
2007年12月26日水曜日
English Class
Today’s English class was very fun, because today’s topic was movie!! I like movie. I often go to TSUTAYA to rental some good movies. I could say various stories today. My teacher is Tom. He is from Canada. Today, he showed us his home movie. It was very interesting and his wife, nieces and nephew are very cute.
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2007年12月25日火曜日
2007年12月24日月曜日
Christmas Eve
Maybe today is happpy day for everyone, but christmas eve is not happy day for me.
I went to my part- time job from 5 a.m. to 6 p.m. I went back home at 7 p.m. I was very tire, so I wanted to sleep. However, my family had plan to go to eat out, so I went to Kumaichi. I didn't eat so much, because I wanted sleep rather than eat!!
I went to my part- time job from 5 a.m. to 6 p.m. I went back home at 7 p.m. I was very tire, so I wanted to sleep. However, my family had plan to go to eat out, so I went to Kumaichi. I didn't eat so much, because I wanted sleep rather than eat!!
2007年12月23日日曜日
Busy busy!!
I went to my part- time job from 3 p.m. to 10 p.m. It was very busy. There were many customers in tsuruya. I have to go to my part time job by 5 a.m tomorrow.
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party☆
I went to Christmas party. This was held under the auspices of WIL. WIL is school. I'm learning English, and so on. I got a calendar of JAL by lot. I wanted this!! I was happy. However, I heard that two people will win a round- trip plane ticket. Actually, I wanted this. But I was lucky!! I got this, too!! Because, I won the authority in second lottery. There were 5 people then. One person can get the ticket. How did I get this? Teacher prepared 5 tomato juices. But Tabasco included in one tomato juice. I drank this. It was Bingo!! I'm so happy!!! I will go to Osaka or Nagoya.
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2007年12月21日金曜日
Learning computers
Computers are indispensable for us. Many people use computers at school, working place, home, and many places. Some company need computers license for work, so computers is very important for us. However, I can’t use computers well. I want computers license and I want to touch type.
Before Writing iii & IV
Sometimes I used my computers. I didn’t use to learn English my computer. So, I didn’t have my blogs and mail address. I used some homepages ‘Yahoo’ and ‘Google’. It is very useful. I often check some national or international news, show business news, sport, and so on. I could get a lot of information easily with computers. It was enough for me. I could understand about Japan. Actually, I was interested in show business news only. If my computers don’t use then, it is not problem. I don’t like computers so much.
During Writing iii & IV
I have to take this class in sophomore, so I had my mail address and my blogs. This is good for me. To write my blogs in English is interesting for me. However, I can’t write sentence in English well. Even if I don’t understand those, it is good for me. I can use a computer a little by the class. My teacher and assistants tell us how to use a computer. They are kind. I can’t type very fast, so I often practice typing. My teacher told us typing game. It is interesting. I have to read many books this class and I have to write about the book on my blog. I’m studying a lot of books this class. Maybe I can watch my favorite books as movie, so I look for this with computer. Computer is very useful.
After Writing iii & IV
When I finish this class, I often use my computer. I think so, because computer is very important for me. If my computer breaks, I have in trouble!!! I can’t live without my computers.
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terrible eve
I have part- time job. Christmas will come soon; actually I don't want to come Christmas. Because the day is very busy. I have to go to my part- time job at 5 a.m. next Monday. It is Christmas Eve. It is very early. I can't wake up. I went to my part- time job at 7 a.m. last year, so I got up at 5 a.m. But I have to go to my job the time this year. I don't like Christmas. I want to spend at my house the day!!!
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2007年12月19日水曜日
presents
I went to English lesson today. Today's topic is helping hand. We talked about presents.We don't remember what receive from anyone. However, we remember what give to somebody. Do you think so!? I think so!! It is interesting.
We talked about kindness. Most people have it. Today, I don't money. Because I put my wallet on my bed. Then my friend bellowed some money for me. Thank you, Yukari!! I think that she will return back something for her. She is kind.
We talked about kindness. Most people have it. Today, I don't money. Because I put my wallet on my bed. Then my friend bellowed some money for me. Thank you, Yukari!! I think that she will return back something for her. She is kind.
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Many straps!!
2007年12月18日火曜日
December 18
When I get back home, my sister and her daughter was my home. I didn't understand why she was my home. Today was my father's birthday!! I have forgotten his birthday, so I didn't buy present for him. My sister told me "maybe I will buy cute pajama for him.” My father is not cute!! I thought it was not good idea. Today's dinner was Seki-han, soup and crab. I ate some crabs. It was good!! I like seki-han. We ate cake after dinner. This was sweet but delicious.
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2007年12月17日月曜日
Winter
It is cold recently. I feel winter. When I go to school on the way, there are many trees of ginkgo. There are the leaves under the tree. The leaf is yellow. I like the leaf, because I can feel season. My favorite season is winter. It is cold, however I don't sweat. It is good for me. I like Nabe and Oden. Those are dinner in winter.
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2007年12月16日日曜日
good day
I went shopping with my sister, her husband and her daughter. I drove my car. I went to Nishimatsu-ya, Yamada electricity and you me town. There were many people, because it was Sunday. I went shopping at 2 o'clock. I came back home at 6 o'clock. I went eating out with them after. I don't remember the name. The Japanese bar is cheap and good!! I want to go there with my friends.
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2007年12月12日水曜日
Learning with computers
Computer is very useful for me. If I have in trouble, I can look for answer easily with computer. Moreover, I can learn about over the world with computer. We can send e-mail with foreigner by computer. I can study English, Spanish, French , and so on. Do you think "Computer is great!!"? I think so. Computer is smart, cool and great technology.
When I have in trouble, I often use "Yahoo", "Google". It is major homepage. It is useful for me. If I can't understand some English, I use computer translation. It is free of charge. However, it often write wrong English. It is problem for me.
I'm sending e-mail with
When I have in trouble, I often use "Yahoo", "Google". It is major homepage. It is useful for me. If I can't understand some English, I use computer translation. It is free of charge. However, it often write wrong English. It is problem for me.
I'm sending e-mail with
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2007年12月11日火曜日
Book review 2-15
I read American life. When I went to America, I don't know about America, I have in trouble many times. I always think "Why!?"
I learned American dream in America. My host parents said "American dream is house, car, and so on." American dream is written in this book.
There are 50 states in America. Alaska is the largest state.
American eat dinner early time. Most American s eat dinner in 6 p.m.
Americans can get driver license when they are 16. Also, when they are 15, they can drive with their parents. Maybe it is like practice. I think so. This book is interesting.
I learned American dream in America. My host parents said "American dream is house, car, and so on." American dream is written in this book.
There are 50 states in America. Alaska is the largest state.
American eat dinner early time. Most American s eat dinner in 6 p.m.
Americans can get driver license when they are 16. Also, when they are 15, they can drive with their parents. Maybe it is like practice. I think so. This book is interesting.
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2007年12月9日日曜日
Commercial message
What is good commercial? I think that it doesn’t have a great influence on children, we can understand easily and it makes me happy. On the other hand, what is bad commercial? It has a great influence on children, we can’t understand. It is not interesting.
Reason
Many children watch on TV in recently years, because they who play in park or somewhere are less than before. So many children watch various commercial. If children watch commercial such as violence, smoking or alcohol every time, they are interesting in it. To make a commercial we need attention. Foe example, commercial of smoking or alcohol need some big sign. All company is putting in commercial “Don’t smoking until 20 years old.” or “Don’t drink until 20 years old.” Its sign is very important.
I request them to make easy commercial, because it I don’t understand bout products by commercial, I don’t want to buy the product. I think that most people have same thinking. Also, I want to writ this in big letters for old people. We often don’t notice important phrases or word. I think that writing commercial in big letters is important. Those sometimes don’t have in trouble.
Commercial of interest is important. I think so, because it sometimes makes us happy. Also, we can talk about interesting commercials in school or anywhere. We think that “I want to buy this!!” or “I want to try this!!” However, if the commercial is not interesting, I don’t watch this or I don’t want to buy product. Do you think so?
Conclusion
Watching many good commercial sometimes is good for children. It doesn’t have a great influence on children. Putting attention in commercial children might think “alcohol and smoking is bad for children.” Writing in big letters is good for everyone. If I have in trouble about this, it doesn’t big problem. Because, writing in big letters is not wrong. Commercial of interest is important. We are interesting in the product by the commercial.
Reason
Many children watch on TV in recently years, because they who play in park or somewhere are less than before. So many children watch various commercial. If children watch commercial such as violence, smoking or alcohol every time, they are interesting in it. To make a commercial we need attention. Foe example, commercial of smoking or alcohol need some big sign. All company is putting in commercial “Don’t smoking until 20 years old.” or “Don’t drink until 20 years old.” Its sign is very important.
I request them to make easy commercial, because it I don’t understand bout products by commercial, I don’t want to buy the product. I think that most people have same thinking. Also, I want to writ this in big letters for old people. We often don’t notice important phrases or word. I think that writing commercial in big letters is important. Those sometimes don’t have in trouble.
Commercial of interest is important. I think so, because it sometimes makes us happy. Also, we can talk about interesting commercials in school or anywhere. We think that “I want to buy this!!” or “I want to try this!!” However, if the commercial is not interesting, I don’t watch this or I don’t want to buy product. Do you think so?
Conclusion
Watching many good commercial sometimes is good for children. It doesn’t have a great influence on children. Putting attention in commercial children might think “alcohol and smoking is bad for children.” Writing in big letters is good for everyone. If I have in trouble about this, it doesn’t big problem. Because, writing in big letters is not wrong. Commercial of interest is important. We are interesting in the product by the commercial.
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2007年12月8日土曜日
Aso Kumamoto Airport
I went to airport to learning about ground staff. The explanation was easy, but I could watch various places. It was fun. I watched a famous person. He is Yoshizumi Ishihara. His blow was big and block!!
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2007年12月7日金曜日
What is this!?
I don't know what this is. However, when I'm watching this, I can relax. I want this!
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Book review 2-14
I read " A white Helon". There are some stories in this book. I recommend "A white Helon".The heroine is Sylvia. She is shy girl, but one day she met a man in the forest. She gradually likes him. The man stayed her house to hunt a white helon and he wanted to tell her about the bird. However, she didn't tell him about it. Because she likes the bird. She didn't want to kill the bird.He left her house and she could keep life of the bird.
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Book review 2-13
I read "HEIDI". I know about Heidi a little. She doesn't have her mother and father, so she was grown up by her grandfather.
She lives in the mountains of Switzerland.
His grandfather live alone in his little wooden house, high up on the mountain. He is an unhappy old man, and hates everybody. But people often change when they meet little Heidi.
She lives in the mountains of Switzerland.
His grandfather live alone in his little wooden house, high up on the mountain. He is an unhappy old man, and hates everybody. But people often change when they meet little Heidi.
This story is easy and interesting. I can read it.
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2007年12月6日木曜日
Book review 2-12
I read "Johnny English". Mr. Bean is famous actor, I think so. He acts Secret Service agent "Johnny English".
He often gets the wrong man or is in the wrong place. Now, suddenly, he's English's Number One Agent (but only because of one of his mistakes!). And his first job? Security for the Queen's crown. Then he wants to be King of England! Johnny’s job is not going to be easy. Can he do it?
I don't think so, because he is strange man. However, this is movie. So maybe the project is success!!
He often gets the wrong man or is in the wrong place. Now, suddenly, he's English's Number One Agent (but only because of one of his mistakes!). And his first job? Security for the Queen's crown. Then he wants to be King of England! Johnny’s job is not going to be easy. Can he do it?
I don't think so, because he is strange man. However, this is movie. So maybe the project is success!!
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Book review 2-11
I read "Nelson Mandela". I know his face, but I don't know about him. Who is he? What is his job? His life is the story of a country boy and fight for the black people of South Africa. He was born in 1918 in village of Mvzeo in the Transkei.When he was a child, he was very happy. But he had in problem his life. He was arrested many times by police. He experienced that he arrested in front of his wife and children. His children are very sad, also he sadly remember his children's faces.He worked for his country and many African people.
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2007年12月5日水曜日
Christmas
Christmas will come soon. My niece came my home. My niece is 3 years old. My mother asked her "what do you want as Christmas present?” She answered "I want some ume-boshis and konbus!!" I was surprised. I thought she is growing up nice girl, because she doesn't ask Santa Claus impossible thing and expensive thing. I will answer my mother "I want some money!!"
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2007年11月28日水曜日
Prison Break
He is Michael Scofield. He is very cool!! Prison break is very famous drama in U.S.A. I like this series. It is ineresting.
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How to Lose a Guy in 10 Days
I watched "How to lose a Guy" with my friend in library. This is romantic comedy.
A woman is a magazine writer. She reserch how to lose a guy for her article. A man is.... I don't remember. But he likes woman. He have to take a party for his plan. This is interesting.
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In the case of hiramii: Book Review 2-2
In the case of hiramii: Book Review 2-2
Book Review 2-2
I learned about his. I like him. I think your book review is good, but... How many books did you read?
Book Review 2-2
I learned about his. I like him. I think your book review is good, but... How many books did you read?
2007年11月25日日曜日
Community Life
Community life
Community life is important for us. I think that we live in community life, so we can grow up our mental and so on. There are communities in college, part- time job, family and various places.
College
Most my friends are same age as me, so I can talk anything easily. A always don’t have to attentive to their. For example, when I went to my first class in my college, there are not my friends then. Because this is my first time!! I don’t know everyone. But if they are same age as you, you can talk easily, can’t you? I think so. Kumamoto is very small, so they might know about my other friends. You can find similarity between you and them. I think that you can enjoy your conversation.
Part- time job
I’m going to my part- time job, but I attentive to my co- workers. They are older than me. But I think I can grow up various things. For example, there is ‘honorific’ in Japan. If I can’t use honorific, people think that it is rude. I think I have to respect to older people. Also, older people are long to live in community life, so I can talk about my future, my human relations and love affair. Moreover they might treat you something. It is good, isn’t it? I have to attentive to older people, but I can experience various things.
Family
Family is very important for our community life. Because I think the basis of community is learn by our family. If the children can’t learn about community, they can’t live well. Most parents want to bring up their children, nice boy and nice girl. I think if they can’t communication to their family, they have something in trouble. I think that the education of children is important.
Conclusion
I think that there are communities in various places. People can grow up in community life.
Community life is important for us. I think that we live in community life, so we can grow up our mental and so on. There are communities in college, part- time job, family and various places.
College
Most my friends are same age as me, so I can talk anything easily. A always don’t have to attentive to their. For example, when I went to my first class in my college, there are not my friends then. Because this is my first time!! I don’t know everyone. But if they are same age as you, you can talk easily, can’t you? I think so. Kumamoto is very small, so they might know about my other friends. You can find similarity between you and them. I think that you can enjoy your conversation.
Part- time job
I’m going to my part- time job, but I attentive to my co- workers. They are older than me. But I think I can grow up various things. For example, there is ‘honorific’ in Japan. If I can’t use honorific, people think that it is rude. I think I have to respect to older people. Also, older people are long to live in community life, so I can talk about my future, my human relations and love affair. Moreover they might treat you something. It is good, isn’t it? I have to attentive to older people, but I can experience various things.
Family
Family is very important for our community life. Because I think the basis of community is learn by our family. If the children can’t learn about community, they can’t live well. Most parents want to bring up their children, nice boy and nice girl. I think if they can’t communication to their family, they have something in trouble. I think that the education of children is important.
Conclusion
I think that there are communities in various places. People can grow up in community life.
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2007年11月23日金曜日
After my part- time job
I went to my part-time job. Then I want to eat a french-fries. While we went to Mac, we could not eat there, because the shop is renovating. We went to cafe.
I met some friends there. They are Eri, Megumi and Saki!!
I talked with my co-worker for 2 hours. She is very kind. I had a good time!!
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Book review 2-10
I didn’t know about Audrey Hepburn so much. I have watched “Roman Holiday” once time, but I don’t remember. Roman holiday opened in London on August 2o, 1953.
Audrey was a ballet dancer, but she never danced in ballet. In 1948 Audrey and her mother moved to London. Her mother worked in flower store. Friends gave them some money, and Audrey went to the Ballet Rambert. This was the most important ballet school in London. Audrey worked have at her dancing. She had no time for boyfriends. But one day the ballet school told her, “I’m sorry, but you’ll never be a famous dancer. You’re too tall.” Audrey was sad, but then something happened. It changed her life.
One evening she went to a party and met a rich English man. James Hanson fell in love with Audrey. He wanted marry her, but she didn’t get marriage with him.
On September 25, 1954, she married Mel Ferrer in Switzerland. She has miscarried two times. She finally gave birth to the boy by the third time.
In 1967 things started to go wrong. She was away from her son, and Mel was friendly with other women. It was very sad for her. In 1967 Audrey married an Italian doctor, but Audrey heard about her husband’s girlfriends, and she was very angry. She left him in 1979. On January 20, 1993, Audrey Hepburn died. She was sixty- four.
Audrey was a ballet dancer, but she never danced in ballet. In 1948 Audrey and her mother moved to London. Her mother worked in flower store. Friends gave them some money, and Audrey went to the Ballet Rambert. This was the most important ballet school in London. Audrey worked have at her dancing. She had no time for boyfriends. But one day the ballet school told her, “I’m sorry, but you’ll never be a famous dancer. You’re too tall.” Audrey was sad, but then something happened. It changed her life.
One evening she went to a party and met a rich English man. James Hanson fell in love with Audrey. He wanted marry her, but she didn’t get marriage with him.
On September 25, 1954, she married Mel Ferrer in Switzerland. She has miscarried two times. She finally gave birth to the boy by the third time.
In 1967 things started to go wrong. She was away from her son, and Mel was friendly with other women. It was very sad for her. In 1967 Audrey married an Italian doctor, but Audrey heard about her husband’s girlfriends, and she was very angry. She left him in 1979. On January 20, 1993, Audrey Hepburn died. She was sixty- four.
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2007年11月21日水曜日
October, 28
I went to Terabaru Free Market to help my cousin. My cousin usually works making Kebabs. Kebab is a Turkish food. It is like a sandwich with chicken and vegetables between bread which is called “Pita- bread”. It is delicious!! There were many people in Terabaru and my cousin’s shop was very busy, also the day was very hot. I went to my part- time job after I finished helping my cousin. I was very tired.
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Tsuruya
I went to tsuruya With my friend. My friend looked for a coat and she found her favorite coat. I don’t have enough money now, because I don’t go to part- time job recently. But I found a boots. It was my cup of tea. I thought about this. I bought this. I have to save the money next month.
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2007年11月14日水曜日
The text for Writing Ⅳ
I have to write my blog, so I often write it in English. I can’t write this in English, but I think that it is good for me. Also, I often use Wikipedia. This is very useful. When I don’t understand word or anything, I look for this with internet. I can understand this easy. I use G-mail. This is very useful for me, because I can send e-mail easily over the world. Now, I’m sending e-mail with my host family. I went to America
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2007年11月11日日曜日
Toy story
Express preference for movies
I like this movie, because it is very interesting. My favorite scene is last scene. Hero’s name is Woody and his friend is Buzz. They use a rocket and their friends who the name is RC. They ran on the street very fast and they could fly in the sky!!
Outline main points for movie review
Introduction
There are 4 people in Andy’s house, but I can’t look his father. Andy loves his toys. Woody is one of his favorite toys. Woody is cowboy and he loves Andy. One day, his friend gave a popular and famous toy for him. This toy is Buzz Lightyear. Buzz Lightyear doesn’t understand about toy, and also he doesn’t think that he is toy. Andy loves Buzz too. But Woody doesn’t like Buzz, because Andy loves him, he say that “I am a space ranger” and his other toys likes him. So woody fail over second floor him. His friends disappointed him.
Andy wanted to take him to restaurant, but he doesn’t know where he is. So he takes woody to restaurant. Woody meet buzz in gas station. Buzz chased him. They were fighting in gas station. Andy didn’t notice that woody didn’t ride in a car. Woody and Buzz have left in there. They chase his with another car. He arrived at restaurant. But!!!!!!
He caught by Sid. Sid is very bad boy. He likes to persecute many toys. Sid lives next door to Andy’s. But Woody and Buzz can’t escape from Sid. Also Woody’s best friend and other friends don’t like Woody, because Buzz lost his arm. They thought this is the work of Woody. But this is not true!! Woody and Buzz could escape through Sid’s toys. Woody likes Buzz and Andy’s toys like him, because they came back together his house. It is happy end!!
Body
This is the first movie to use a full computer graphics. It cost a lot of money to make the movie. The director were awarded Academy prize, and were nominated other Academy prize.
The production is Pixar Animation studios. This is famous production. Toy story, Toy story 2, Finding Nemo, and Cars was produced by this company.
They is making Toy story 3 now. This will watch in 2010.
Conclusion
I recommend this, because this is very interesting movie and if you like toy this movie makes you happy. I think so. I don’t like toy so much, but it is my favorite movie. This movie’s characters are very cute!!
I like this movie, because it is very interesting. My favorite scene is last scene. Hero’s name is Woody and his friend is Buzz. They use a rocket and their friends who the name is RC. They ran on the street very fast and they could fly in the sky!!
Outline main points for movie review
Introduction
There are 4 people in Andy’s house, but I can’t look his father. Andy loves his toys. Woody is one of his favorite toys. Woody is cowboy and he loves Andy. One day, his friend gave a popular and famous toy for him. This toy is Buzz Lightyear. Buzz Lightyear doesn’t understand about toy, and also he doesn’t think that he is toy. Andy loves Buzz too. But Woody doesn’t like Buzz, because Andy loves him, he say that “I am a space ranger” and his other toys likes him. So woody fail over second floor him. His friends disappointed him.
Andy wanted to take him to restaurant, but he doesn’t know where he is. So he takes woody to restaurant. Woody meet buzz in gas station. Buzz chased him. They were fighting in gas station. Andy didn’t notice that woody didn’t ride in a car. Woody and Buzz have left in there. They chase his with another car. He arrived at restaurant. But!!!!!!
He caught by Sid. Sid is very bad boy. He likes to persecute many toys. Sid lives next door to Andy’s. But Woody and Buzz can’t escape from Sid. Also Woody’s best friend and other friends don’t like Woody, because Buzz lost his arm. They thought this is the work of Woody. But this is not true!! Woody and Buzz could escape through Sid’s toys. Woody likes Buzz and Andy’s toys like him, because they came back together his house. It is happy end!!
Body
This is the first movie to use a full computer graphics. It cost a lot of money to make the movie. The director were awarded Academy prize, and were nominated other Academy prize.
The production is Pixar Animation studios. This is famous production. Toy story, Toy story 2, Finding Nemo, and Cars was produced by this company.
They is making Toy story 3 now. This will watch in 2010.
Conclusion
I recommend this, because this is very interesting movie and if you like toy this movie makes you happy. I think so. I don’t like toy so much, but it is my favorite movie. This movie’s characters are very cute!!
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Many cakes!!
I ate some sweet cakes for three days, because my aunt’s birthday is November 9th, my niece’s birthday is November 10th and my brother’s is birthday November 11th. My family celebrated their birthdays at my house. My aunt’s cake was chocolate, my niece’s cake was strawberry shortcake and my brother’s cake was chocolate!! My mother bought those cakes as different stores, but those cakes were all very good!!
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2007年11月9日金曜日
Book review 2-09
David Beckham is very famous. But I don't know about soccer, so I'm not interesting in him. I could know about him, because I read a book about him. He is very cool and he is from England. And his wife is from England. I thought his wife is from American!!
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2007年11月7日水曜日
Book review 2-08
I like Tom Cruise. He is very cool.I didn't know that he had gotten marriage two time before. Now, he got marriage another actress and he has a daugter.
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Book review 2-07(lucky break)
The hero is football player.He is not famous man. When he is playing in a football game, somebody pushed him. He falls and breaks his legs. Breaking own legs is unlucky, isn't it? What does the book's title mean?
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Prto-Portfolio 2-02 Essays
Fall Semester Essays
| Essays | Short titles [+ links] | Dates yy.mm.dd | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M | Notes |
| Mega- essay 07.10.12 | Kumamoto | 2007.10.10 | 5 | 784 | 4 | ||||
| Favorite place(-s) 07.10.26 | My favorite place | 2007.10.26 | 5 | 364 | 0 | ||||
| Movie review 07.11.11 | Toy story | 2007.11.11 | 4 | 421 | 4 | ||||
| 4th essay 07.11.25 | Community life | 2007.11.25 | 5 | 324 | 0 | ||||
| 5th essay 07.12.09 |
| 2007.12.09 | 5 | 335 | 0 | ||||
| 6th essay 07.12.21 | Learning computer | 2007.12.21 | 4 | 330 | |||||
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Key:
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included
M: number of other media included
Culture
When I went to America Japan
[100 words]
2007年11月1日木曜日
2007年10月26日金曜日
My favorite place
My favorite Place
My favorite place is my house. There are my room, my family and my pet in my house. There is not the place that I can relax anywhere.
My room
My room is comfortable. It is some larger than my family, because my sister and brother had used the room with me. Now, I’m using the room alone. I like listening music, reading book and watching DVD. There are favorite CDs, books and DVDs in my room, so I can listen to music, reading book and watching DVDs anytime. I like sleeping, so I especially like my bed in my room. I can always do a favorite thing.
My family
My family is nice and they know anything about me, because they have lived with me for 20 years. We often go to somewhere together. If I have a trouble that I can’t say my mother and my father, I talk about this to my sister, my cousin or my aunt. They sometimes don’t hear me seriously. They often say some jokes, but they try to give me a boost.
My pet
My pet is very cute and interesting. He is a mongrel dog, so he is very strong. Maybe he is 13 years old this year. If he was a human, he would be about one hundred years. His body is beige, but his paw is white and short. So he can’t go up and down the stairs well. It is cute and it is interesting that I find that he goes up and down the stairs hard. He makes me happy.
Conclusion
As you can see, my house is my best position. When I am in my room, I can refresh and relax that I do some favorite thing. When I am with my family in my house, I can stay unaffected myself and I can see my tearful face in their presence. They are more experienced than me, I can ask easily. I take a load off my mind. When I take care of my pet, I relaxed in a smile. My pet is not smart, however his action is funny. The place that I can cheer up is my house!!
My favorite place is my house. There are my room, my family and my pet in my house. There is not the place that I can relax anywhere.
My room
My room is comfortable. It is some larger than my family, because my sister and brother had used the room with me. Now, I’m using the room alone. I like listening music, reading book and watching DVD. There are favorite CDs, books and DVDs in my room, so I can listen to music, reading book and watching DVDs anytime. I like sleeping, so I especially like my bed in my room. I can always do a favorite thing.
My family
My family is nice and they know anything about me, because they have lived with me for 20 years. We often go to somewhere together. If I have a trouble that I can’t say my mother and my father, I talk about this to my sister, my cousin or my aunt. They sometimes don’t hear me seriously. They often say some jokes, but they try to give me a boost.
My pet
My pet is very cute and interesting. He is a mongrel dog, so he is very strong. Maybe he is 13 years old this year. If he was a human, he would be about one hundred years. His body is beige, but his paw is white and short. So he can’t go up and down the stairs well. It is cute and it is interesting that I find that he goes up and down the stairs hard. He makes me happy.
Conclusion
As you can see, my house is my best position. When I am in my room, I can refresh and relax that I do some favorite thing. When I am with my family in my house, I can stay unaffected myself and I can see my tearful face in their presence. They are more experienced than me, I can ask easily. I take a load off my mind. When I take care of my pet, I relaxed in a smile. My pet is not smart, however his action is funny. The place that I can cheer up is my house!!
[367 words]
2007年10月25日木曜日
Book review 2-06
I read "Dino's Day in London". It was interesting and easy book.
The hero who is taxi driver was said by his boss "Go to The Ritz Hotel!". He had to take care of famous film star's son, her son is nice boy. But…
The hero who is taxi driver was said by his boss "Go to The Ritz Hotel!". He had to take care of famous film star's son, her son is nice boy. But…
I can't say after that!!
[49 words]
Book review 2-05
I don't like a mouse. I read "Marcel and The White Star ". This hero is a mouse and he is a good mouse. If a mouse came in my room, I would cry out for help. It is certain. …Certainly!!
[45 words]
2007年10月24日水曜日
2007年10月23日火曜日
Book review 2-04
I read "BRAD PITT".
He is good acter.I like him. I didn't know that many women likes him before he become actor.
I recommend "Ocean's 11" It is exciting movie.
He is good acter.I like him. I didn't know that many women likes him before he become actor.
I recommend "Ocean's 11" It is exciting movie.
[30 words]
Book review 2-03
Who want to be a star??
"You!!"her mother said.
"No, I don't think so. I want to be a citizenry!!"
I decided to my job which I want to be a something in the future like her.
"You!!"her mother said.
"No, I don't think so. I want to be a citizenry!!"
I decided to my job which I want to be a something in the future like her.
[37 words]
Book review 2-02
I read a easy book which the name is Newspaper Chase. Harry is hero, but he is not wonderful guy. He is old man and a thief. He went back to home with a precious picture from art gallery, but he was caught easily by police officer. When I read this that I think if someone do bad thinking, it find easy for unexpected thing.
[65 words]
2007年10月17日水曜日
Proto-Portfolio 2-01
| Months | 08 | 09 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 01 | Totals | fn | Indices |
| Book reviews | / | / | 6 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 18 | ||
| Blog posts | / | 2 | 8 | 17 | 27 | 5 | 59 | ||
| Words | / | 93 | 948 | 1696 | 2540 | 662 | 5939 | ||
| Sub-totals | / | 14 | 21 | 31 | 9 | 75 |
2007年10月10日水曜日
No Reservations
I went to a theater with my friend after school on Wednesday. Today’s fee is cheaper than the other days, because it was ladies day!! I watched “No Reservations” It was good. Next time I want to watch it on DVD. I think this movie described American life. When I watched this movie, I thought that I live in America in the future.
[62 words]
Aso
I went to Takamori with my father and my mother.It was a good day. I ate Soba and some chicken.The soba shop was introduce in a magazine. The soba was soso, but the chicken was very good. Next, I went to "Cafe Purin". It was near Aso farm land. It was so good. I ate a parfait. I loved it. I want to go again. I recommend this.
[68 words]
Book review 2-01 [ISLAND FOR SALE]
This story is about Lana. Lana is small island. He decided to sell his castle, because he didn't have enough money. American rock star wanted to buy his castle and his island for his girlfriend, so they came to his island. But there are not light, food, hot water!! His girlfriend don't like island....... she is a spoilt woman!!
They don't want to live there, rock star didn't buy these. He couldn't sell his castle and island, so he couldn't get a lot of money. However, he could get happiness.
[90 words]
They don't want to live there, rock star didn't buy these. He couldn't sell his castle and island, so he couldn't get a lot of money. However, he could get happiness.
[90 words]
☆Kumamoto☆
Famous sightseeing place
Kumamoto Castle
Kumamoto Castle is one of Japan Kumamoto
Mt. Aso
Mt. Aso Mt. Aso
Amakusa
Amakusa is encircled by the beautiful sea, so people go to there to swim or fishing. It takes time till we go to Amakusa from the Kumamoto
Famous food
Ikinari Dango
Ikinari Dango is a famous food in
Horsemeat
Horsemeat is a famous food in Kumamoto Kumamoto
Lotus root of mustard
Speaking of one in the local cooking of
Famous people
Uchimura Teruyoshi
He is one of the famous people from
Ayumi Kataoka
She is 21 years old. She is a famous girl in
Suzannu
Do you know that Suzannu's hometown is
Famous shopping place
PARCO
PARCO is the bit big shopping center in
DIAMOND CITY CLAIR
“DIAMOND CITY CLAIR” is a famous shopping mall in Kumamoto
TSURUYA
There is "Tsuruya" in the center of the city. It is establishment of a business 50 years and over, and a long- established department store to represent in
Famous fair
Fuzisakigu autumn festival
It is one of famous festival in
Hinokuni festival
This festival is held for 3 days in the middle of August every year. But this year held the festival for 2 days. First day, some famous music artists come to concert in
Yamaga garden lantern festival
"Yamaga tourou festival" is held for two days, August 15 to 16. It is called the one of the
Link
http://akyt91.web.infoseek.co.jp/yamaga/yamaga.html
[784 words]
scool festival part2
I don’t belong to club, so I will have enough time!! Member of all club in KGU walked on the street in cent er of city for advertising. They make wonderful things for the day. And, they wear funny clothes or beautiful clothes. Some men make up their face!!
[49 words]
2007年10月3日水曜日
School festival
I don’t belong to club, so I will have enough time!! Maybe I will go to somewhere with my friends then. This year, “Flow” will come to KGU. I don’t know about Flow. Flow is singer, but I think they are not famous singer. Last year, Ayaka came to KGU. She is singer too, but she is very famous in Japan
[99 words]
2007年10月2日火曜日
My niece
I talked with my friends. It was interesting and exciting, because my friends are very funny. But I forgot my class, so I didn't go to class. When I went to back home, my niece came to my home. I said "I'm sleepy, because I was tired." Then my niece said to me "Sleep on my lap!" I said to her "No thank you." She said "Everyone ignored me........ I have the mumps." She is interesting.
[76 words]
2007年9月26日水曜日
Sunshine Himawari's house: Wonderful of Kumamoto
Sunshine Himawari's house: Wonderful of Kumamoto
Do you like house's meat!!? I don't like it, because it is raw meat. I have been toKumamoto castle many times, because I am Kumamoto-jin. Are you Kumamoto-jin??
Do you like house's meat!!? I don't like it, because it is raw meat. I have been toKumamoto castle many times, because I am Kumamoto-jin. Are you Kumamoto-jin??
Summer vacation
I went to America
2007年9月25日火曜日
PARCO
I went to shopping at PARCO. I went there by bicycle with my friends. When we went down a slope, the signal changed red, so we stopped. Then a man neglected the signal, so we went too. But some police officer watched us. “You must stop when the signal is red!!!” The police officer said with a microphone. I was so embarrassed.
[62 words]
2007年9月15日土曜日
Baseball
I went to Fukuoka with my family. I watched a baseball game. My father and mother like the Softbank Hawks, so we go to watch a baseball game in Fukuoka at least once a month every year. However, I couldn't watch a winning game this year. If the Hawks win a game, we can watch some fireworks. Though I couldn't watch some fireworks, I couldn't get a Hawks player's sign ball!!
2007年9月8日土曜日
Takamori
I went to Takamori with my mother and my father two month ago. It was a good day. I ate Soba and some chicken. The soba shop was introduced in a magazine. The Soba was soso, but the chicken was very good. Next, I went to "cafe purin". It was near Aso farm land. It was so good. I ate a parfait. I loved it. I want to go to again. I recommend this.
[74 words]
2007年7月16日月曜日
CD Review
My favorite CDs are “PLAY” and “Greatest Hits: My Prerogative”.
I like Namie Amuro. She is very cute and very cool. Her grandmother or her grandfather is Italian. She can dance very well. She will be 30 years old on September. Can you believe it!? Besides, she has a child!! Can you believe it!? She is slender. She looks like very young. She released her new album recently. The album is “PLAY”. My sister likes her, so my sister bought the CD. Also I watched her DVD. This is very cool and great!! And I watched her special animation. This is famous CG animation. It was interesting. Also I could listen to interesting song. My favorite songs are “Hide ＆ Seek” and “Hello”. And I like “FUNKY TOWN”. This song is cool. I recommend the CD and DVD!!
I like Namie Amuro. She is very cute and very cool. Her grandmother or her grandfather is Italian. She can dance very well. She will be 30 years old on September. Can you believe it!? Besides, she has a child!! Can you believe it!? She is slender. She looks like very young. She released her new album recently. The album is “PLAY”. My sister likes her, so my sister bought the CD. Also I watched her DVD. This is very cool and great!! And I watched her special animation. This is famous CG animation. It was interesting. Also I could listen to interesting song. My favorite songs are “Hide ＆ Seek” and “Hello”. And I like “FUNKY TOWN”. This song is cool. I recommend the CD and DVD!!
I think that Britney Spears is very famous singer in the world. She will be 26 years old on December. She is cute. She can dance very well. She has two Children. I can’t believe it. She is strange recently. But I like her song. My favorite song is … I like many songs. So I rented her album. This is “Greatest Hits: My Prerogative”. I like the CD. I bought the DVD. She is very cool and funny. I recommend this.
Book Review 1-14
I read "Leonardo DiCaprio". He is a very famous acter. He is cool. He is star!! His famous movie is "Titanic". This is very good movie. I watched "Departed". This movie is very exciting!!
Book Review 1-13 (Little Women
This was written by Louisa May Alcott. This is famous story in Japan. The name is "Wakakusa Monogatariw". I watched the DVD. I like this. I recommend this.
2007年7月11日水曜日
Portfolio
ID: 6107
Writing IIIc: Portfolio1.1. Catalog | Titles of posts with links | Dates (yyyy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words | Numbers of comments |
| Example | Restaurant: Star of India | 2007.03.13 | 185 | 1 |
| 1st (introduction) April (150+ words) | Introduce myself | 2007.04.11 | 154 | 0 |
| 2nd (campus life) May (200+ words) | My campus life | 2007.05.22 | 171 | 0 |
| 3rd (your choice) June 5 (250+ words) | Movie review | 2007.06.04 | 257 | 6 |
| 4th (Kumamoto) June 18 (250+ words) | Fantastic Kumamoto | 2007.06.18 | 328 | 1 |
| 5th (review 1) July 2 (175+ words) | Restaurant review | 2007.07.02 | 176 | 5 |
| 6th (review 2) July 16 (200+ words) | CD Review | 2007.07.16 | 220 | 4 |
| --- | --- | TOTALS: | 1306 | 16 |
1.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.
・ I think 3rd essay is best, because I can write long. And I like the movie, so I think I can tell classmate about the movie.
2.0. Comments
--- | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments* |
| 2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog | Cherry blossomhttp://writingstudioblog.blogspot.com/2007/03/cherry-blossoms-ichifusa-reservoir.html | 2007.04.11 | 5 | |
| 2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog | My favorite ○○○ is ... | 2007.04.18 | 18 | good |
| 2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog | Special dinner | 2007.05.01 | 9 | good |
| 2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd) | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments* |
| 2.4.1. Any one of your essays | Movie Review | 2007.06.06 | 37 | |
| 2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2007.07.20 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 13 | I can't write long!! |
| 2.4.2. Any of your other posts | Restaurant Review | 2007.07.04 | 25 | |
| 2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2007.07.04 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 33 | I can write some comments. |
| 140 |
2.5. Additional reflections on comments:
- I could get some comments. I was grad, because some people saw my blog. They said "Yes!", when they posted their comments in my blog.
3.0. Typing Speed Trials (5 mins.)
| --- | Numbers of words | Dates (yyyy.mm.dd) |
| 3.1. Worst typing speed trial | 35 | 2007.04.18 |
| 3.2. Best typing speed trial | 100 | 2007.07.11 |
| 3.3. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials | 70 | |
4.0. Book Reviews
| 4.1. Catalog | Titles of posts with links | Dates (yyyy.mm.dd) | Number of words | Numbers of comments |
| Example: | Vampire Killer | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
| 1-01 | Book review 1-01 and 1-02 | 2007.04.24 | 59 | 0 |
| 1-02 | Book review 1-01 and 1-02 | 2007.04.24 | 48 | 0 |
| 1-03 | Diana | 2007.05.08 | 99 | 0 |
| 1-04 | animal book | 2007.5.22 | 38 | 1 |
| 1-05 | Titanic | 2007.05.23 | 126 | 0 |
| 1-06 | 2007.05.29 | 63 | 0 | |
| 1-07 | 2007.06.20 | 70 | 0 | |
| 1-08 | 2007.06.21 | 66 | 0 | |
| 1-09 | THE WIZARD OF OZ | 2007.06.24 | 29 | 0 |
| 1-10 | I can swim | 2007.06.26 | 66 | 0 |
| 1-11 | A little princess | 2007.06.26 | 55 | 0 |
| 1-12 | Huck | 2007.07.11 | 16 | 0 |
| 1-13 | Little Women | 2007.07.16 | 28 | 0 |
| 1-14 | Lonardo DiCaprio | 2007.07.16 | 33 | 0 |
| --- | --- | TOTALS: | 796 | 1 |
4.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.
- My best Book Review is Diana, because I didn't know about Diana. I could know about her, so I could write about her. I could write very hard.
5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking & Media Presentation
| --- | Yes | No |
| 5.1. Does your blog have an archive in the sidebar? | ○ | |
| 5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ○ | |
| 5.1.2. Is the archive organized by week? | ○ | |
| 5.1.3. Is the archive at the top of the sidebar? | ○ | |
| 5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | ○ | |
| 5.2.1. Do your labels include each of these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
| ○ | |
| ○ | |
| ○ | |
| 5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ○ | |
| --- | --- |
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| 5.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
| 5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures? | ○ | |
| ○ | |
| --- | --- |
| 5.3.2. Posts with multiple links | --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
| 5.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ○ | |
| --- | --- |
5.4. What would you most like to do to enhance the overall presentation of your blog?
- I would like to write many things. I can write it as possible with picture everyday.
6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing:
- I think I couldn't write very long and I couldn't write everyday. I have to write!!
7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors:
・My peers and successors can write sentence very long, and interesting!! Also they are posting a lot of pictures, so I think it is good!!
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