2008年1月30日水曜日

Suggestions for successors

I tell you three points: I think that........
1. If you are fine, you go to this class.
2. You listen to teacher's deep voice. And, if you don't know what to do, you ask teacher.
3. You write anything on your blog. It is good deed that you post something your blog everyday.

If you can do the three points, you can get this credit, because teacher will admit your efforts. Also, you may get a prize. If you want to get this prize, I think you need some device. You have to post outstanding. Maybe your friends will admit your efforts. Moreover, posting some sentences in English on your blog will benefit you.
[115 words]

2008年1月15日火曜日

Witty remark

I went to beauty salon today. I waited a few minutes. I read a famous book then. When I read this, I was happy. I found this blog.
[20 words]
Click this

2008年1月14日月曜日

Coming of Age Day

Today was Coming of Age Day. I wore kimono for event. I met many old friends. I took some pictures with my friends. Kimoni is very heavy, so I don’t like this. I went to Shimo- streets after event. Many people were there. I went to alumni association in the night. Many friends of when I was junior high school were in hall. It was good time for me.
It is interesting news: check this
[69 words]

2008年1月13日日曜日

Sunday

I went to Hanshin department store to practice of make up with my fiend. I don’t make up, so I don’t know how to make up. My friend and me changed when we want back home. After, I ate up with my family, because I will grow up tomorrow. I ate many foods and drunk many drinks. It was good. “Gozan” is fashionable bar. My brother is manager chief. I recommend this.
[72 words]

2008年1月12日土曜日

My favorite book

My favorite book is chocoleate factory, because I like Johnny Depp. He is not young, but he is cool.
Chocolate factory is famous. It is interesting factory. If there is this in my city, I want to go to there. Because I like chocolate.
[45 words]

Air port

I like plane. When I was little, I often go to Kumamoto airport with my mother and father. I thought I want to go to airport other city or country. I got a airplane tickets before, so I will go to Aichi with my sister. I have never been to Aichi!!!
[43 words]
Centrair

Saturday

I went to school, I studied math. I don’t remember equation. I studied this when I was junior high- school student. I went to shopping with my friends after school. I wanted to buy inner. I found a good inner, it was cheep and simple. I think that I will wear this next Saturday.
[54 words]

2008年1月11日金曜日

Friday

I took a test, it was “speaking test.” I could not speak well, because I didn’t study this. It was rainy, so my feeling is bad. However, I like rain. I am relaxed this. I went to my part- time job after school. Today, customers were not so much, because it was rairn. I think so.
[56 words]

2008年1月10日木曜日

LIVE

I went to concert with my friend after school. Angela Aki is my favorite singer. She can sing song very well. However, she talk a lot!! Most singer sing a lot. But her ratio of song and talk is 5 to 5!! [43 word]">

2008年1月9日水曜日

Wednesday

I went to school and I went to bread shop with my friend in the afternoon. I went to English lessen after school. I went back my house, my niece was in my house.
[34 words]

portfolio

Student ID: 06107
(last five digits of
your student no.)

Writing IVc: Portfolio
(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words

(See: Note 2, below.)

Months
08
09
10
11
12
01
Totals
fn
Indices
Book reviews /
/
6
4
5
4
19
total/19*2

Blog posts /
2
8
17
27
26
64
total/64*2

Words /
93
948
1696
2540
2769
8039
total/8039*2

TOTAL
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1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below)

1.1. Showcase
Short
titles
[+ links]
Dates
(yy.mm.dd)

W
C
L
P
M
Notes
Mega-
essay
07.10.12
kumamoto
2007.10.105
784
4




Movie
review
07.11.11
toy story
2007.11.114
421
4




Community
life
07.11.25
community life
2007.11.255
324
0




TV in
Japan
07.12.09
commercial message
2007.12.095
335
0




Learning w/
computers
07.12.21
learning computers
2007.12.214
330
0
























Totals---
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28
2558
8



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Key:
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
  • [I think that I could write about Toy Story well, because I have the DVD. I could write outline etc. One person said to me "Your essay is good!" So I chose this. ]

2.0. Comments

Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
pab-kenji-in-seattle
2007.09.26
34

2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*toy story
2007.11.14
45

2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
toy story
2007.11.14
52

2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
kumamoto
2007.10.10
83

2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2007.10.10
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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43

2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
prison break
2007.11.28
14

2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2007.12.10
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
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13






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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?
  • Nothing. I didn't set this, because I didn't know how to set this.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

  • [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; write out your reflections on giving and receiving comments here.]

3.0. Typing Speed Trials

Showcase
Numbers of words
Dates (yy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial*
43
2007.10.17
3.2. Best typing speed trial*
100
2007.11.7
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst)
57
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3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials** 69




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* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. ShowcaseShort titles
with links
Dates (yy.mm.dd)WordsComments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
2-01
Island for sale07.10.1090
0
2-02
Newspaper Chase07.10.23
65
0
2-03
Star07.10.23
37
0
2-04
Brad Pitt
07.10.23
30
0
2-05
Marcel and the White Star07.10.25
45
0
2-06
Dino's Dat in London07.10.25
40
0
2-07
Lucky break07.11.07
39
0
2-08
Tom Cruise 07.11.07
29
0
2-09
David Beckham07.11.09
51
1
2-10
Audrey Hepburn07.11.23
232
0
2-11
Nelson Mandela07.12.06
107
0
2-12
Johnny English07.12.06
94
0
2-13
HEIDI07.12.07
73
0
2-14
A white Helon
07.12.07
90
0
2-15
American life
07.12.11
105
0
2-16
Scotland
08.01.07
103
0
2-17
Washington D.C.
08.01.07
82
0
2-18
Anita's big day
08.01.07
90
0
2-19
A New Zealand adventure
08.01.07
93
0





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TOTALS:
1495
1
Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
  • [I think that I could write book review 10, because I could write very long and I could know about her. I think that I could tell about book and about her.]

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media


Showcase
Yes
No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive?
y

5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? y

5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? y

5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?

y

5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?y

5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):---
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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)
y

  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")
y

  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)
y

  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)

n
  • "movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)
y

5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? y

  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? 5
  • other labels attached to three or more posts
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  • Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.
  • o books (32)
    • essays (12)
    • photos (16)
    • portfolios (5)
    • quickposts (69)

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5.3. Links & media---
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5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? Y

  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?

N
  • How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics?
    • 16 posts including pictures or other graphics
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5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? Y

  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?*
    • 4 posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
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5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?
N
  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?
    • ___ posts including other media
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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here:
    1. ...
    2. ...
    3. ...

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5.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.
  1. I posted some pictures.
  2. I posted two my favorite movies.
  3. ...

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

  • ...

7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

  • ...

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Notes:
  1. This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
  2. The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
  3. This essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from

2008年1月8日火曜日

Funny

I'm crazing for watching this movie. It is trifling cartoon. It was interestiong. My sister have this DVD. I watched this with my family. Everyone roared with laughter. I wanted to put my favorite movie on my blog, but I couldn't find this. [38 words]

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Credit

I took a test. It was easy, but I don't know get its credit.
[13 words]

2008年1月7日月曜日

School day

I went to school, however it will finish sonn. It will start long vacation.
I met many friends.
[10 words]

Book review 2-19

I read a new zealand adventure.
This story is good. Two girl went to New zealand. They must go to bus station from airport by taxi. Then a boy was waving to her. She doesn't have enough time, so she wanted to take a taxi. He has enough time, so he takes a taxi for her.
She is very happy!! But she found a cellphone on the seat. She asked taxi driver "Is this your cellphone?"It was not his. He said "this is boy's cellphone." She and her friend look for a boy. This is adventuere!!
[93 words]

Book review 2-18

I read ANITA'S BIG DAY. Anita is actress. She knew her big news. It is that she becomes a movie star. She has to go to movie studio at 10 o'clock. Then her boyfriend calls her with his cell phone. The day is big day for him, too. He got a fast car. Anita likes a fast car. He pick her up at her home, she experience various thing. I don't want to do such as her. Is this story interesting? I think so-so, but I can read this easily.
[90 words]

Book review 2-17

I read Washington D.C. I didn't know about this. I have known the name. 1600 Pennsylvania Avenue, the most famous address in America.It is the home of President of United States. Most people call in the White House. The president's office is in the west of the building. It is called the oval office.The white house has 132 rooms, 412 doors and 147 windows. I could not imagination. I can say "It is very big!!"
I want to go to there!!
[82 words]

Book review 2-16

I read Scotland. I am interested in Scotland, because I have a friend who is Scottish.Scotland is the country north of England, part of Britain (England, Scotland and Wales) and of the United Kingdom.It is often cold and grey. It rains a lot. But many visitors love this country very much.
Scotland is not a very hot country so take some warm clothes with you when you go. In the summer, the days are long and it can be warm. But it can be cold and wet, too, and in the winter the days are short and there can be snow.
[103 words]

2008年1月5日土曜日

shopping part 2

I went to PARCO and Tsuruya with my friends. I bought two coats. It was little expensive, but it was good. And I went to school at 1 p.m. I studied about company. It was difficult for me.
[38 words]

2008年1月4日金曜日

Shopping

I went to CLAIR with my sister. However, I didn’t find my favorite clothes. Also, I went to Fujisaki- shrine with my mother and my niece. I didn’t buy Omikuji, I don’t want to confuse myself by it. I bought a Tapioca juice for my niece and I went to Tsuruya. I bought a one- piece dress. It was cute. I went to my part- time job today!!
[68 words]

Streching

"I want to concract my body!!!!"
If you think so, you should try this. http://www.kenkodiet.jp/ex_bathing.html
[14 words]

Streching

"I want to contract my body!!!"
If you think so, I recommend this homepages. http://www.kenkodiet.jp/ex_bathing.html
[14 words]

2008年1月3日木曜日

Bad day? Good day?

I went to my part- time job today. It was bad day, because I was said “can you hear me?” by customer. I couldn’t hear her voice well, because it was very noisy. However, I thought about myself. I went to Uotami with my co-worker. It was good, I didn’t have enough money, so sub- manager and my seniors paid some money. Thank you!!!
[64 words]

Game

I found interesting game. If you study English, you should try this.
[12 words]

2008年1月2日水曜日

January, 2

I went to my part- time job at 11 a.m. I will go to my job tomorrow, too. I don’t like music of New Years Day. It is a drowsy music. I planned to go to PARCO after my job, but I could eat many salads and other foods today, I didn’t go. I want to go to PARCO’s sale!!!
[60 words]

2008年1月1日火曜日

New Years Day

I slept all day!! In the morning, my sister, her husband and her daughter came to my home. They were supposed to go to Tagawa, but her daughter caught a cold. So they couldn’t go to Tagawa. Her husband went to there alone. Tagawa is his hometown. I have never been to Tagawa. I will go to my part- time job at 11 a.m.
[64 words]