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2008年1月30日水曜日

Suggestions for successors

I tell you three points: I think that........
1. If you are fine, you go to this class.
2. You listen to teacher's deep voice. And, if you don't know what to do, you ask teacher.
3. You write anything on your blog. It is good deed that you post something your blog everyday.

If you can do the three points, you can get this credit, because teacher will admit your efforts. Also, you may get a prize. If you want to get this prize, I think you need some device. You have to post outstanding. Maybe your friends will admit your efforts. Moreover, posting some sentences in English on your blog will benefit you.
[115 words]

2008年1月9日水曜日

portfolio

Student ID: 06107
(last five digits of
your student no.)

Writing IVc: Portfolio
(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words

(See: Note 2, below.)

Months
08
09
10
11
12
01
Totals
fn
Indices
Book reviews /
/
6
4
5
4
19
total/19*2

Blog posts /
2
8
17
27
26
64
total/64*2

Words /
93
948
1696
2540
2769
8039
total/8039*2

TOTAL
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---
---
---
---
---
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1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below)

1.1. Showcase
Short
titles
[+ links]
Dates
(yy.mm.dd)

W
C
L
P
M
Notes
Mega-
essay
07.10.12
kumamoto
2007.10.105
784
4




Movie
review
07.11.11
toy story
2007.11.114
421
4




Community
life
07.11.25
community life
2007.11.255
324
0




TV in
Japan
07.12.09
commercial message
2007.12.095
335
0




Learning w/
computers
07.12.21
learning computers
2007.12.214
330
0
























Totals---
---
28
2558
8



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Key:
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
  • [I think that I could write about Toy Story well, because I have the DVD. I could write outline etc. One person said to me "Your essay is good!" So I chose this. ]

2.0. Comments

Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
pab-kenji-in-seattle
2007.09.26
34

2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*toy story
2007.11.14
45

2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
toy story
2007.11.14
52

2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
kumamoto
2007.10.10
83

2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
---
2007.10.10
---
---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
---
---
43

2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
prison break
2007.11.28
14

2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
---
2007.12.10
---
---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
---
13






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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?
  • Nothing. I didn't set this, because I didn't know how to set this.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

  • [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; write out your reflections on giving and receiving comments here.]

3.0. Typing Speed Trials

Showcase
Numbers of words
Dates (yy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial*
43
2007.10.17
3.2. Best typing speed trial*
100
2007.11.7
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst)
57
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3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials** 69




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* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. ShowcaseShort titles
with links
Dates (yy.mm.dd)WordsComments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
2-01
Island for sale07.10.1090
0
2-02
Newspaper Chase07.10.23
65
0
2-03
Star07.10.23
37
0
2-04
Brad Pitt
07.10.23
30
0
2-05
Marcel and the White Star07.10.25
45
0
2-06
Dino's Dat in London07.10.25
40
0
2-07
Lucky break07.11.07
39
0
2-08
Tom Cruise 07.11.07
29
0
2-09
David Beckham07.11.09
51
1
2-10
Audrey Hepburn07.11.23
232
0
2-11
Nelson Mandela07.12.06
107
0
2-12
Johnny English07.12.06
94
0
2-13
HEIDI07.12.07
73
0
2-14
A white Helon
07.12.07
90
0
2-15
American life
07.12.11
105
0
2-16
Scotland
08.01.07
103
0
2-17
Washington D.C.
08.01.07
82
0
2-18
Anita's big day
08.01.07
90
0
2-19
A New Zealand adventure
08.01.07
93
0





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TOTALS:
1495
1
Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
  • [I think that I could write book review 10, because I could write very long and I could know about her. I think that I could tell about book and about her.]

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media


Showcase
Yes
No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive?
y

5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? y

5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? y

5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?

y

5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?y

5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):---
---
  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)
y

  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")
y

  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)
y

  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)

n
  • "movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)
y

5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? y

  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? 5
  • other labels attached to three or more posts
---
---
  • Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.
  • o books (32)
    • essays (12)
    • photos (16)
    • portfolios (5)
    • quickposts (69)

---
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5.3. Links & media---
---
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? Y

  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?

N
  • How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics?
    • 16 posts including pictures or other graphics
---
---
5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? Y

  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?*
    • 4 posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
---
---
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?
N
  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?
    • ___ posts including other media
---
---
  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here:
    1. ...
    2. ...
    3. ...

---

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5.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.
  1. I posted some pictures.
  2. I posted two my favorite movies.
  3. ...

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

  • ...

7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

  • ...

____________________
Notes:
  1. This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
  2. The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
  3. This essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from

2007年11月7日水曜日

Prto-Portfolio 2-02 Essays

Fall Semester Essays

Essays
Short
titles
[+ links]
Dates
yy.mm.dd

W
C
L
P
M
Notes
Mega-
essay
07.10.12
Kumamoto
2007.10.10
5
784
4




Favorite
place(-s)
07.10.26
My favorite place
2007.10.26
5
364
0




Movie
review
07.11.11
Toy story
2007.11.11
4
421
4




4th essay

07.11.25
Community life
2007.11.25
5
324
0




5th essay

07.12.09


Commercial messages


2007.12.09

5

335

0




6th essay

07.12.21
Learning computer2007.12.21
4
330

























Totals---
---






---

Key:
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included

2007年10月17日水曜日

Proto-Portfolio 2-01

Proto-Portfolio 2-01: Reviews, Posts and Words
Months
08
09
10
11
12
01
Totals
fn
Indices
Book reviews /
/
6
4
4
4
18


Blog posts /
2
8
17
27
5
59


Words /
93
948
1696
2540
662
5939


Sub-totals
/

14
21
31
9
75

2007年7月11日水曜日

Portfolio

ID: 6107
Writing IIIc: Portfolio
1.0. Essays

1.1. Catalog

Titles of posts with links
Dates
(yyyy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words
Numbers of comments
Example
Restaurant: Star of India
2007.03.13
185
1
1st (introduction)
April (150+ words)

Introduce myself

2007.04.11
154
0
2nd (campus life)
May (200+ words)

My campus life

2007.05.22
171
0
3rd (your choice)
June 5 (250+ words)

Movie review

2007.06.04
257
6
4th (Kumamoto)
June 18 (250+ words)
Fantastic Kumamoto 2007.06.18
328
1
5th (review 1)
July 2 (175+ words)
Restaurant review
2007.07.02
176
5
6th (review 2)
July 16 (200+ words)

CD Review

2007.07.16

220

4










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TOTALS:
130616
Note: Calculate totals without the example.

1.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

 ・ I think 3rd essay is best, because I can write long. And I like the movie, so I think I can tell classmate about the movie.


2.0. Comments

---

Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog
Cherry blossomhttp://writingstudioblog.blogspot.com/2007/03/cherry-blossoms-ichifusa-reservoir.html 2007.04.11
5

2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blogMy favorite ○○○ is ... 2007.04.18
18
good
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog
Special dinner 2007.05.01
9
good
2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays
Movie Review 2007.06.06
37

2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
---

2007.07.20
---
---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
---
---
13
I can't write long!!
2.4.2. Any of your other posts

Restaurant Review

2007.07.04
25

2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
---

2007.07.04
---
---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
---

33
I can write some comments.



140

* Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Additional reflections on comments:
  • I could get some comments. I was grad, because some people saw my blog. They said "Yes!", when they posted their comments in my blog.

3.0. Typing Speed Trials (5 mins.)

---
Numbers of words
Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial
35
2007.04.18
3.2. Best typing speed trial
100
2007.07.11
3.3. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials
70





4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. CatalogTitles of posts with links
Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)Number of wordsNumbers of comments
Example:
Vampire Killer
2007.05.16
39
1
1-01
Book review 1-01 and 1-02 2007.04.24
59
0
1-02
Book review 1-01 and 1-02 2007.04.24
48
0
1-03
Diana 2007.05.08
99
0
1-04
animal book 2007.5.22
38
1
1-05
Titanic 2007.05.23
126
0
1-06

Prince William


2007.05.29

63
0
1-07

A trip to the library


2007.06.20

70

0
1-08


NEW YORK


2007.06.21

66

0
1-09

THE WIZARD OF OZ

2007.06.24
29

0
1-10

I can swim

2007.06.26
66
0
1-11

A little princess

2007.06.26
55
0
1-12

Huck

2007.07.11
16
0
1-13

Little Women

2007.07.16
28
0
1-14

Lonardo DiCaprio

2007.07.16
33
0






























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TOTALS:
796
1
Note: Calculate totals without the example.

4.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

  • My best Book Review is Diana, because I didn't know about Diana. I could know about her, so I could write about her. I could write very hard.

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking & Media Presentation

---
Yes
No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive in the sidebar?


5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?

5.1.2. Is the archive organized by week?

5.1.3. Is the archive at the top of the sidebar?


5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?

5.2.1. Do your labels include each of these required labels (typed accurately):---
---
  • "books" (plural)


  • "essays" (plural)


  • "quickposts" (plural, with no spaces)


5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?

  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?
    • I have 7 labels.
---
---
  • Which labels, and how many posts each?
    • book(14)
    • essay(6)
    • food & drink (4)
    • go (5)
    • job (1)
    • kaigaikenshu (1)
    • speed trial (12)


---
---
5.3. Links & media---
---
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures?

  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?


  • How many of your blog posts include pictures or other graphics?
    • I posted 16 pictures.
---
---
5.3.2. Posts with multiple links---
---
  • How many of your posts include three (3) or more links?
    • I have 5 multiple links.
---
---
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?

  • How many of your blog posts include other media?
    • Nothing
---
---




5.4. What would you most like to do to enhance the overall presentation of your blog?
  • I would like to write many things. I can write it as possible with picture everyday.


6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing:
  • I think I couldn't write very long and I couldn't write everyday. I have to write!!



7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors:
  

  ・My peers and successors can write sentence very long, and interesting!! Also they are posting a lot of pictures, so I think it is good!!