2008年2月3日日曜日
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I learned about foreign-affiliated company. I didn't think that I want to work there, because I can't speak English well. I thought we have to speak English well. However, I learned to need like Japanese soul. It is important.
2008年1月30日水曜日
Suggestions for successors
I tell you three points: I think that........
1. If you are fine, you go to this class.
2. You listen to teacher's deep voice. And, if you don't know what to do, you ask teacher.
3. You write anything on your blog. It is good deed that you post something your blog everyday.
If you can do the three points, you can get this credit, because teacher will admit your efforts. Also, you may get a prize. If you want to get this prize, I think you need some device. You have to post outstanding. Maybe your friends will admit your efforts. Moreover, posting some sentences in English on your blog will benefit you.
1. If you are fine, you go to this class.
2. You listen to teacher's deep voice. And, if you don't know what to do, you ask teacher.
3. You write anything on your blog. It is good deed that you post something your blog everyday.
If you can do the three points, you can get this credit, because teacher will admit your efforts. Also, you may get a prize. If you want to get this prize, I think you need some device. You have to post outstanding. Maybe your friends will admit your efforts. Moreover, posting some sentences in English on your blog will benefit you.
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2008年1月15日火曜日
Witty remark
I went to beauty salon today. I waited a few minutes. I read a famous book then. When I read this, I was happy. I found this blog.
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Click this
2008年1月14日月曜日
Coming of Age Day
Today was Coming of Age Day. I wore kimono for event. I met many old friends. I took some pictures with my friends. Kimoni is very heavy, so I don’t like this. I went to Shimo- streets after event. Many people were there. I went to alumni association in the night. Many friends of when I was junior high school were in hall. It was good time for me.
It is interesting news: check this
It is interesting news: check this
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2008年1月13日日曜日
Sunday
I went to Hanshin department store to practice of make up with my fiend. I don’t make up, so I don’t know how to make up. My friend and me changed when we want back home. After, I ate up with my family, because I will grow up tomorrow. I ate many foods and drunk many drinks. It was good. “Gozan” is fashionable bar. My brother is manager chief. I recommend this.
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2008年1月12日土曜日
My favorite book
My favorite book is chocoleate factory, because I like Johnny Depp. He is not young, but he is cool.
Chocolate factory is famous. It is interesting factory. If there is this in my city, I want to go to there. Because I like chocolate.
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Saturday
I went to school, I studied math. I don’t remember equation. I studied this when I was junior high- school student. I went to shopping with my friends after school. I wanted to buy inner. I found a good inner, it was cheep and simple. I think that I will wear this next Saturday.
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2008年1月11日金曜日
Friday
I took a test, it was “speaking test.” I could not speak well, because I didn’t study this. It was rainy, so my feeling is bad. However, I like rain. I am relaxed this. I went to my part- time job after school. Today, customers were not so much, because it was rairn. I think so.
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2008年1月10日木曜日
LIVE
I went to concert with my friend after school. Angela Aki is my favorite singer. She can sing song very well. However, she talk a lot!! Most singer sing a lot. But her ratio of song and talk is 5 to 5!! [43 word]">
2008年1月9日水曜日
Wednesday
I went to school and I went to bread shop with my friend in the afternoon. I went to English lessen after school. I went back my house, my niece was in my house.
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portfolio
Student ID: 06107
(last five digits of
your student no.)
(last five digits of
your student no.)
Writing IVc: Portfolio
(See: Note 1, below)
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, and Words
(See: Note 2, below.) Months | 08 | 09 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 01 | Totals | fn | Indices |
Book reviews | / | / | 6 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 19 | total/19*2 | |
Blog posts | / | 2 | 8 | 17 | 27 | 26 | 64 | total/64*2 | |
Words | / | 93 | 948 | 1696 | 2540 | 2769 | 8039 | total/8039*2 | |
TOTAL | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- |
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below) 1.1. Showcase | Short titles [+ links] | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M | Notes |
Mega- essay 07.10.12 | kumamoto | 2007.10.10 | 5 | 784 | 4 | ||||
Movie review 07.11.11 | toy story | 2007.11.11 | 4 | 421 | 4 | ||||
Community life 07.11.25 | community life | 2007.11.25 | 5 | 324 | 0 | ||||
TV in Japan 07.12.09 | commercial message | 2007.12.09 | 5 | 335 | 0 | ||||
Learning w/ computers 07.12.21 | learning computers | 2007.12.21 | 4 | 330 | 0 | ||||
Totals | --- | --- | 28 | 2558 | 8 | --- |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included
M: number of other media included
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- [I think that I could write about Toy Story well, because I have the DVD. I could write outline etc. One person said to me "Your essay is good!" So I chose this. ]
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | pab-kenji-in-seattle | 2007.09.26 | 34 | |
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | toy story | 2007.11.14 | 45 | |
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | toy story | 2007.11.14 | 52 | |
2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments* |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | kumamoto | 2007.10.10 | 83 | |
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2007.10.10 | --- | --- |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 43 | |
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | prison break | 2007.11.28 | 14 | |
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2007.12.10 | --- | --- |
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 13 | |
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?- Nothing. I didn't set this, because I didn't know how to set this.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; write out your reflections on giving and receiving comments here.]
3.0. Typing Speed Trials
Showcase | Numbers of words | Dates (yy.mm.dd) |
3.1. Worst typing speed trial* | 43 | 2007.10.17 |
3.2. Best typing speed trial* | 100 | 2007.11.7 |
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst) | 57 | --- |
3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials** | 69 | |
* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.
4.0. Book Reviews
4.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
2-01 | Island for sale | 07.10.10 | 90 | 0 |
2-02 | Newspaper Chase | 07.10.23 | 65 | 0 |
2-03 | Star | 07.10.23 | 37 | 0 |
2-04 | Brad Pitt | 07.10.23 | 30 | 0 |
2-05 | Marcel and the White Star | 07.10.25 | 45 | 0 |
2-06 | Dino's Dat in London | 07.10.25 | 40 | 0 |
2-07 | Lucky break | 07.11.07 | 39 | 0 |
2-08 | Tom Cruise | 07.11.07 | 29 | 0 |
2-09 | David Beckham | 07.11.09 | 51 | 1 |
2-10 | Audrey Hepburn | 07.11.23 | 232 | 0 |
2-11 | Nelson Mandela | 07.12.06 | 107 | 0 |
2-12 | Johnny English | 07.12.06 | 94 | 0 |
2-13 | HEIDI | 07.12.07 | 73 | 0 |
2-14 | A white Helon | 07.12.07 | 90 | 0 |
2-15 | American life | 07.12.11 | 105 | 0 |
2-16 | Scotland | 08.01.07 | 103 | 0 |
2-17 | Washington D.C. | 08.01.07 | 82 | 0 |
2-18 | Anita's big day | 08.01.07 | 90 | 0 |
2-19 | A New Zealand adventure | 08.01.07 | 93 | 0 |
--- | --- | TOTALS: | 1495 | 1 |
4.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- [I think that I could write book review 10, because I could write very long and I could know about her. I think that I could tell about book and about her.]
5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
Showcase | Yes | No |
5.1. Does your blog have an archive? | y | |
5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | y | |
5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | y | |
5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | y | |
5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | y | |
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
| y | |
| y | |
| y | |
| n | |
| y | |
5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | y | |
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
5.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? | Y | |
| N | |
| --- | --- |
5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | Y | |
| --- | --- |
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | N | |
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
5.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.- I posted some pictures.
- I posted two my favorite movies.
- ...
6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing
- ...
7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors
- ...
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Notes:
- This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
- The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
- This essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from
2008年1月8日火曜日
Funny
I'm crazing for watching this movie. It is trifling cartoon. It was interestiong. My sister have this DVD. I watched this with my family. Everyone roared with laughter. I wanted to put my favorite movie on my blog, but I couldn't find this. [38 words]
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2008年1月7日月曜日
School day
I went to school, however it will finish sonn. It will start long vacation.
I met many friends.
I met many friends.
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Book review 2-19
I read a new zealand adventure.
This story is good. Two girl went to New zealand. They must go to bus station from airport by taxi. Then a boy was waving to her. She doesn't have enough time, so she wanted to take a taxi. He has enough time, so he takes a taxi for her.
She is very happy!! But she found a cellphone on the seat. She asked taxi driver "Is this your cellphone?"It was not his. He said "this is boy's cellphone." She and her friend look for a boy. This is adventuere!!
This story is good. Two girl went to New zealand. They must go to bus station from airport by taxi. Then a boy was waving to her. She doesn't have enough time, so she wanted to take a taxi. He has enough time, so he takes a taxi for her.
She is very happy!! But she found a cellphone on the seat. She asked taxi driver "Is this your cellphone?"It was not his. He said "this is boy's cellphone." She and her friend look for a boy. This is adventuere!!
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Book review 2-18
I read ANITA'S BIG DAY. Anita is actress. She knew her big news. It is that she becomes a movie star. She has to go to movie studio at 10 o'clock. Then her boyfriend calls her with his cell phone. The day is big day for him, too. He got a fast car. Anita likes a fast car. He pick her up at her home, she experience various thing. I don't want to do such as her. Is this story interesting? I think so-so, but I can read this easily.
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Book review 2-17
I read Washington D.C. I didn't know about this. I have known the name. 1600 Pennsylvania Avenue, the most famous address in America.It is the home of President of United States. Most people call in the White House. The president's office is in the west of the building. It is called the oval office.The white house has 132 rooms, 412 doors and 147 windows. I could not imagination. I can say "It is very big!!"
I want to go to there!!
I want to go to there!!
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Book review 2-16
I read Scotland. I am interested in Scotland, because I have a friend who is Scottish.Scotland is the country north of England, part of Britain (England, Scotland and Wales) and of the United Kingdom.It is often cold and grey. It rains a lot. But many visitors love this country very much.
Scotland is not a very hot country so take some warm clothes with you when you go. In the summer, the days are long and it can be warm. But it can be cold and wet, too, and in the winter the days are short and there can be snow.
Scotland is not a very hot country so take some warm clothes with you when you go. In the summer, the days are long and it can be warm. But it can be cold and wet, too, and in the winter the days are short and there can be snow.
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2008年1月5日土曜日
shopping part 2
I went to PARCO and Tsuruya with my friends. I bought two coats. It was little expensive, but it was good. And I went to school at 1 p.m. I studied about company. It was difficult for me.
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2008年1月4日金曜日
Shopping
I went to CLAIR with my sister. However, I didn’t find my favorite clothes. Also, I went to Fujisaki- shrine with my mother and my niece. I didn’t buy Omikuji, I don’t want to confuse myself by it. I bought a Tapioca juice for my niece and I went to Tsuruya. I bought a one- piece dress. It was cute. I went to my part- time job today!!
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Streching
"I want to concract my body!!!!"
If you think so, you should try this. http://www.kenkodiet.jp/ex_bathing.html
If you think so, you should try this. http://www.kenkodiet.jp/ex_bathing.html
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Streching
"I want to contract my body!!!"
If you think so, I recommend this homepages. http://www.kenkodiet.jp/ex_bathing.html
If you think so, I recommend this homepages. http://www.kenkodiet.jp/ex_bathing.html
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2008年1月3日木曜日
Bad day? Good day?
I went to my part- time job today. It was bad day, because I was said “can you hear me?” by customer. I couldn’t hear her voice well, because it was very noisy. However, I thought about myself. I went to Uotami with my co-worker. It was good, I didn’t have enough money, so sub- manager and my seniors paid some money. Thank you!!!
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2008年1月2日水曜日
January, 2
I went to my part- time job at 11 a.m. I will go to my job tomorrow, too. I don’t like music of New Years Day. It is a drowsy music. I planned to go to PARCO after my job, but I could eat many salads and other foods today, I didn’t go. I want to go to PARCO’s sale!!!
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2008年1月1日火曜日
New Years Day
I slept all day!! In the morning, my sister, her husband and her daughter came to my home. They were supposed to go to Tagawa, but her daughter caught a cold. So they couldn’t go to Tagawa. Her husband went to there alone. Tagawa is his hometown. I have never been to Tagawa. I will go to my part- time job at 11 a.m.
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