2007年7月16日月曜日

CD Review




My favorite CDs are “PLAY” and “Greatest Hits: My Prerogative”.
I like Namie Amuro. She is very cute and very cool. Her grandmother or her grandfather is Italian. She can dance very well. She will be 30 years old on September. Can you believe it!? Besides, she has a child!! Can you believe it!? She is slender. She looks like very young. She released her new album recently. The album is “PLAY”. My sister likes her, so my sister bought the CD. Also I watched her DVD. This is very cool and great!! And I watched her special animation. This is famous CG animation. It was interesting. Also I could listen to interesting song. My favorite songs are “Hide & Seek” and “Hello”. And I like “FUNKY TOWN”. This song is cool. I recommend the CD and DVD!!


I think that Britney Spears is very famous singer in the world. She will be 26 years old on December. She is cute. She can dance very well. She has two Children. I can’t believe it. She is strange recently. But I like her song. My favorite song is … I like many songs. So I rented her album. This is “Greatest Hits: My Prerogative”. I like the CD. I bought the DVD. She is very cool and funny. I recommend this.

Book Review 1-14

I read "Leonardo DiCaprio". He is a very famous acter. He is cool. He is star!! His famous movie is "Titanic". This is very good movie. I watched "Departed". This movie is very exciting!!

Book Review 1-13 (Little Women

This was written by Louisa May Alcott. This is famous story in Japan. The name is "Wakakusa Monogatariw". I watched the DVD. I like this. I recommend this.

2007年7月11日水曜日

Portfolio

ID: 6107
Writing IIIc: Portfolio
1.0. Essays

1.1. Catalog

Titles of posts with links
Dates
(yyyy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words
Numbers of comments
Example
Restaurant: Star of India
2007.03.13
185
1
1st (introduction)
April (150+ words)

Introduce myself

2007.04.11
154
0
2nd (campus life)
May (200+ words)

My campus life

2007.05.22
171
0
3rd (your choice)
June 5 (250+ words)

Movie review

2007.06.04
257
6
4th (Kumamoto)
June 18 (250+ words)
Fantastic Kumamoto 2007.06.18
328
1
5th (review 1)
July 2 (175+ words)
Restaurant review
2007.07.02
176
5
6th (review 2)
July 16 (200+ words)

CD Review

2007.07.16

220

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TOTALS:
130616
Note: Calculate totals without the example.

1.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

 ・ I think 3rd essay is best, because I can write long. And I like the movie, so I think I can tell classmate about the movie.


2.0. Comments

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Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog
Cherry blossomhttp://writingstudioblog.blogspot.com/2007/03/cherry-blossoms-ichifusa-reservoir.html 2007.04.11
5

2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blogMy favorite ○○○ is ... 2007.04.18
18
good
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog
Special dinner 2007.05.01
9
good
2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays
Movie Review 2007.06.06
37

2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2007.07.20
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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13
I can't write long!!
2.4.2. Any of your other posts

Restaurant Review

2007.07.04
25

2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2007.07.04
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
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33
I can write some comments.



140

* Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Additional reflections on comments:
  • I could get some comments. I was grad, because some people saw my blog. They said "Yes!", when they posted their comments in my blog.

3.0. Typing Speed Trials (5 mins.)

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Numbers of words
Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial
35
2007.04.18
3.2. Best typing speed trial
100
2007.07.11
3.3. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials
70





4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. CatalogTitles of posts with links
Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)Number of wordsNumbers of comments
Example:
Vampire Killer
2007.05.16
39
1
1-01
Book review 1-01 and 1-02 2007.04.24
59
0
1-02
Book review 1-01 and 1-02 2007.04.24
48
0
1-03
Diana 2007.05.08
99
0
1-04
animal book 2007.5.22
38
1
1-05
Titanic 2007.05.23
126
0
1-06

Prince William


2007.05.29

63
0
1-07

A trip to the library


2007.06.20

70

0
1-08


NEW YORK


2007.06.21

66

0
1-09

THE WIZARD OF OZ

2007.06.24
29

0
1-10

I can swim

2007.06.26
66
0
1-11

A little princess

2007.06.26
55
0
1-12

Huck

2007.07.11
16
0
1-13

Little Women

2007.07.16
28
0
1-14

Lonardo DiCaprio

2007.07.16
33
0






























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TOTALS:
796
1
Note: Calculate totals without the example.

4.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

  • My best Book Review is Diana, because I didn't know about Diana. I could know about her, so I could write about her. I could write very hard.

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking & Media Presentation

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Yes
No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive in the sidebar?


5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?

5.1.2. Is the archive organized by week?

5.1.3. Is the archive at the top of the sidebar?


5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?

5.2.1. Do your labels include each of these required labels (typed accurately):---
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  • "books" (plural)


  • "essays" (plural)


  • "quickposts" (plural, with no spaces)


5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?

  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?
    • I have 7 labels.
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  • Which labels, and how many posts each?
    • book(14)
    • essay(6)
    • food & drink (4)
    • go (5)
    • job (1)
    • kaigaikenshu (1)
    • speed trial (12)


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5.3. Links & media---
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5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures?

  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?


  • How many of your blog posts include pictures or other graphics?
    • I posted 16 pictures.
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5.3.2. Posts with multiple links---
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  • How many of your posts include three (3) or more links?
    • I have 5 multiple links.
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5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?

  • How many of your blog posts include other media?
    • Nothing
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5.4. What would you most like to do to enhance the overall presentation of your blog?
  • I would like to write many things. I can write it as possible with picture everyday.


6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing:
  • I think I couldn't write very long and I couldn't write everyday. I have to write!!



7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors:
  

  ・My peers and successors can write sentence very long, and interesting!! Also they are posting a lot of pictures, so I think it is good!!

Book review 1-12 (Huck)

I read "Huckle berry Finn". Huck is kind. I watched the movie. This is interesting too.

G-mail

G-mail is very convenience, because we can send a mail to anyone. I like sending an email, so I often check the G-mail. I sent a mail to my host family. They are American. They live in USA!! It is wonderful.


2007年7月4日水曜日

My teacher

There are many teachers in my collage. They are Japanese, American, Chinese, and Korean and so on. My teacher is Japanese and American. My speaking teacher is Jeff. Jeff is very funny. He is teacher, but he has a bar. I want to go to his bar, because there are many foreign people in his bar. I’d like to talk with them. A teacher said me “You should try to make some friends, so you can speak English very well!!” I believe his advice. My listening teacher is Mr. Satou. His voice is good. He can speak English very well.

2007年7月2日月曜日

Restaurant review

Joyfull is famous family restaurant. The restraint is cheap and delicious, so I like the restaurant. I think that Joyfull is popular restaurant in various people who are young man, young woman, old man and old woman.

I don’t go eating there lately. I went to there many times when I was a high school student. Then I was for 2 or 3 hours. I can relax there. I sometimes studied for exam.

My favorite menu is “Doria of chicken”. I love this. I always eat this. The chicken is tender. The cheese and tomato sauce are very good.

If we have a service ticket, we can drink on the cheap. I can use a drink bar. There are many juices, tea and so on. I always drink a white water. I love this. I sometimes drink a Lipton. Then I get milk. I love a milk tea. Lipton is good.

My friend works Joyfull. She said “there is a shaved ice now”. I have to go to Joyfull!! I recommend this. And I recommend Joyfull!!