2007年5月16日水曜日

Proto-portfolio

1.0. Essays

1.1. Self-introduction essay

* link Introduce myself
* 154 words
* 2007.04.11

1.2. Second essay

* Campus life
* 171 words
* 2007.05.22

1.3. Third essay

* Movie review
* 257 words
* 2007.06.04

1.4. Fourth essay

* link Fantastic Kumamoto
* 328 words
* 2007.06.18

1.5. Best essay: Which do you believe is better & why?
My best essay is fourth essay, because I wrote many things about Kumamoto. Also I like third essay.
2.0. Comments


2.1. Your first comment on instructor's blog:

* link Cherry blossoms@Ichifusa Reservoir
*108 words
* 2007.03.31
* Do you believe that is a good comment? Why or why not?
The blog's picture is very beautiful!!

2.2. Your best comment on a classmates blog

* link My favorite ○○○ is ...
* 21 words
* 2007.04.18
* Why do you believe that is a good comment?
It is short, but I could feel mari's feelings.

2.3. The best comment by a classmate on your blog by a classmate

* link Special dinner
* 64 words
* 2007.02.18
* Why do you believe that is a good comment?
She said "It looks so delicious!!!!Please make it for me (>U<)"
2.4. The greatest numbers of comments on your blog

2.4.1. The greatest number of comments on any of your essays




  • Title of your essay with link: Movie Review
  • Date of essay: 2007.06.04
  • The total number of comments on that essay: 6 comments
  • Best comment on that essay by a classmate: BloggerID
  • Date of best comment on that essay: 2007.06.06
  • When did you respond to those comments? 2007.mm.dd
  • What did you do in response to those comments?
    • ...
2.4.2. Greatest number of comments on any of your other posts




  • Title of your post with link: ☆My father☆
  • Date of post: 2007.06.12
  • The total number of comments on that post: 1 comments
  • Best comment on that post by a classmate (Blogger ID):
  • Date of best comment on that post: 2007.06.14
  • When did you respond to those comments? 2007.06.27
  • What did you do in response to those comments?
    • Yes!! That's right!!

.5. Additional reflections on blog comments:




  • ...

3.0. Typing speed trials

3.1. Worst speed

* 35 words

* 2007.04.18

3.2. Best speed

* 52 words

* 2007.05.09

3.3. Average speed

* 41 words

* 4 Other comments or reflections:

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. Book review 1-01

* Book review 1-01 and 1-02
* 59 words
* 2007.04.24

4.2. Book review 1-02

* Booker review 1-01 and 1-02
* 48 words
* 2007.04.24

4.3. Book review 1-03

* Diana
* 99 words
* 2007.05.08

4.4. Book review 1-04

* animal book
* 39 words
* 2007.05.22

4.5. Book review 1-05

* Titanic
* 126 words
* 2007.05.23

4.6. Book review 1-06

* Prince William
* 62 words
* 2007.05.29

4.7. Book review 1-07

* A trip to the library
* 70 words
* 2007.06.20

4.8. Book review 1-08

* New York
* 66 words
* 2007.06.21

4.9. Book review 1-09

* The Wizard of OZ
* 29 words
* 2007.06.24

4.10. Book review 1-10

* I can swim
* 68 words
* 2007.06.26

4.11. Book review 1-11

* A little princess
* 55 words
* 2007.06.26

5.0. Visual presentation

5.1. Archive at top of sidebar (Yes/No):Yes

5.1.1. Displaying titles of posts:

5.1.2. Organized by month (or week):


5.2. Labels displayed in sidebar (Yes/No):

5.1.1. Including: books, essays & quickposts:

5.1.2. Including other labels that you've attached to more than one post:

* List of other labels that you've used:


5.3. Links & media

5.3.1. Pictures

* Does your blog profile include a picture?
* How many of your blog posts include pictures?

5.3.w. Posts with multiple links

* How many of your posts include three or more links?

5.3.3. Other media

* How many of your blog posts include other media?

* Which other media have you used?






2 件のコメント:

Paul Beaufait さんのコメント...

Hi Moe,

Please add sections 4 (Book reviews) and 5 (Visual presentation) to this proto-portfolio, and fill in the rest of the details.

Then have another look at the foci of items 1.3. and 2.1. The focus of item 1.3. is which of your first two essays you think is better, and the focus of item 2.1. is your comment rather than my picture.

Cheers.

Paul Beaufait さんのコメント...

Hello again, Moe.

You still don't seem to have added sections 4 and 5 to your proto-portfolio. You can clip and paste those two sections from the "all in one" post on the Writing Studio Blog.

Section 3 seems to have collapsed. Please restructure and update that as necessary.

Finally, in item 2.1., please comment on the quality/-ies of your comment, rather than the quality of the picture on my blog.